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Thats funny man. I dont think the last panel is neccessary though with 'sure'.
I think you could have had:
1st panel: 'mr morgan complaining blah..'
'am sick of being stereotyped blah..'
you: 'yeh...'
2nd panel
you: 'wanna push over the caretaker...blah'
As the caretaker is the punchline, it should really be the last thing said or it takes away from the joke. So you have the set-up and anticipation of the kids complaining about being perceived badly because of other students, then you find out that they are just as bad themselves.
I think you could have had:
1st panel: 'mr morgan complaining blah..'
'am sick of being stereotyped blah..'
you: 'yeh...'
2nd panel
you: 'wanna push over the caretaker...blah'
As the caretaker is the punchline, it should really be the last thing said or it takes away from the joke. So you have the set-up and anticipation of the kids complaining about being perceived badly because of other students, then you find out that they are just as bad themselves.